"I LOVED both Cosy and Griffin! This story was ABSOLUTE PERFECTION!"- Kendall Ryan, New York Times bestselling author
Making Up an all-new laugh-out-loud romantic comedy from New York Times bestselling author Helena Hunting is available now!
Cosy Felton is great at her job—she knows just how to handle the awkwardness that comes with working at an adult toy store. So when the hottest guy she’s ever seen walks into the shop looking completely overwhelmed, she’s more than happy to turn on the charm and help him purchase all of the items on his list.
Griffin Mills is using his business trip in Las Vegas as a chance to escape the broken pieces of his life in New York City. The last thing he wants is to be put in charge of buying gag gifts for his friend’s bachelor party. Despite being totally out of his element, and mortified by the whole experience, Griffin is pleasantly surprised when he finds himself attracted to the sales girl that helped him.
As skeptical as Cosy may be of Griffin’s motivations, there’s something about him that intrigues her. But sometimes what happens in Vegas doesn’t always stay in Vegas and when real life gets in the way, all bets are off. Filled with hilariously awkward situations and enough sexual chemistry to power Sin City, Making Up is the next standalone in the Shacking Up world.
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Review:
Rating: 2 out of 5 stars
Drama, drama and more drama. That was a sum up of everything that happened in the book. I don't think these two had many moments to breathe and just be. The book tired me and for me, it's the worst in the series. I have read books almost all the books in the series and I am in the middle of Handle with care which is the next book in the series and this one is by far the worst in the series (edit: this might change once I finish HWC because who knows what will happen in the unread part, but I don't believe it will).
This paragraph is re-written because I missed something and I ended up having a different impression for the book. I thought that Nev and Griffin had slept together, but as Nev later says, they didn't and they just passed out in his car. This made me raise my rating to 2 stars. I still consider this the worst book because the Nev/Griffin plot proves that the drama was useless. It was just another plot to keep them apart as if everything else was going so well for them. And somehow Griffin was always the one who was at fault which was also annoying. He was the one doing the chase and trying to fix things.
The reason above, the drama and the feeling that these two were not meant to be is the reason why I decided to go with 2 stars. It's harsh, I know, but I didn't enjoy the book, Cosy's character could have been better and Griffin seemed to always make the wrong decisions. I liked Griffin in the beginning and how he made a move on Cosy, but after that, it went downhill.
This paragraph is re-written because I missed something and I ended up having a different impression for the book. I thought that Nev and Griffin had slept together, but as Nev later says, they didn't and they just passed out in his car. This made me raise my rating to 2 stars. I still consider this the worst book because the Nev/Griffin plot proves that the drama was useless. It was just another plot to keep them apart as if everything else was going so well for them. And somehow Griffin was always the one who was at fault which was also annoying. He was the one doing the chase and trying to fix things.
The reason above, the drama and the feeling that these two were not meant to be is the reason why I decided to go with 2 stars. It's harsh, I know, but I didn't enjoy the book, Cosy's character could have been better and Griffin seemed to always make the wrong decisions. I liked Griffin in the beginning and how he made a move on Cosy, but after that, it went downhill.
Excerpt:
We’re a couple of minutes away from my apartment, which also means we’re almost at the end of our date. End-of-date protocol often means a goodnight kiss. And I’ve eaten onions. Lots of them. What the hell was I thinking? I feel around in my shorts pocket, hoping I have a random stick of gum. I find a tiny square packet and pull it out, along with an old tissue. I shove that back in my pocket and sigh with relief as I carefully open the Listerine Pocketpak. There’s one strip left. I pop it in my mouth, wishing I had water since my mouth is dry and I’m suddenly super nervous. Griffin pulls up in front of my apartment building. I swallow a bunch of times, trying to get the strip to dissolve on my tongue and glance out the tinted window, seeing it from his perspective. I don’t live in a bad part of town, but I sure as hell wouldn’t leave this car sitting out here for any length of time unless I wanted it keyed or stripped down. Griffin shifts into park and turns to me, one hand resting on the back of my seat near the headrest. “I had a great time, Cosy.” “Me too, thanks for dinner.” I tried to fork over my share, but he was quick on the credit card draw. “It was my pleasure.” He leans in the tiniest bit, a nonverbal cue that he’s going in for a kiss. I mirror the movement, giving him the go ahead. My stomach flutters in anticipation. I exhale slowly through my nose. Even though the Listerine strip should be doing its job to mask the onions, I don’t want to ruin the moment by breathing that in his face. His fingertips skim my jaw, and I close my eyes. And then his lips brush my cheek. I wait for them to move a couple of inches to the right, but after what feels like a lot of seconds—and is probably only a few—I crack a lid. Griffin is still close, a wry smile on his lips and a smolder in his eyes. “Seriously, that’s it? A kiss on the cheek?” His smile widens, making his eyes crinkle at the corners. He’s nothing like the guys I usually end up on dates with. College boys don’t take things slow. If I were out with one of the guys from school, I’d be sitting in a beat-up Civic with some stupid music playing, and he’d be all over me with his tongue halfway down my throat, copping a feel. “I thought all the onions you ate were the equivalent to garlic for vampires.” Griffin fingers my hair near my shoulder. I’d really like him to finger something else. Wait. I mean I’d like to feel his hands on me. Not in my pants. Okay, maybe I’d like them in my pants, but not after date number one. “I wasn’t thinking, and I really like onions. A lot. In hindsight, it’s not a great date food. I feel kinda dumb. And I guess at first I wasn’t so sure about you. How was I supposed to know you’d actually be kind of normalish?” “Normalish?” “Well, you drink club soda on purpose, so you can’t be all there.” I tap his temple. Griffin circles my wrist with his fingers and drops his head, lips brushing over my knuckle. “We can’t all be perfect, now, can we?” “I suppose not, and perfect is boring.” “That it is.” He hums against my skin, and I feel it through my entire body. “I would like to try that kiss again, if you’re still interested.”About Helena
New York Times and USA Today bestselling author of PUCKED, Helena Hunting lives on the outskirts of Toronto with her incredibly tolerant family and two moderately intolerant cats. She's writes contemporary romance ranging from new adult angst to romantic sports comedy.
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